First two are good, but the third is a bit too busy for me. Text needs work too. Well done in any case.
06-16-2009, 09:10 PM
Ptka
The second one is awesome, lots of stuff going on, but it's still got a good focal.
My tip for you would be to tone some things down, make your sigs a bit bigger, and just make sure that things go there because they have a purpose, not just to fill up space.
06-16-2009, 11:03 PM
The Fallen
I agree that the first two are good. The third one has way too much going on.
06-16-2009, 11:40 PM
Dom
Third one I can barely see the render. Your text needs work but you'll get there. Keep practicing. :)
06-17-2009, 06:40 AM
WarBacon7
Thanks. I'll keep working on text. On the second, that c4d all the way to the left was put there to fill out some space, since otherwise, it would be black there and I didn't see it working out so well. So any tips on getting rid of unfilled space that doesn't go well with the sig? Or should I just leave it?