Okami

http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/1989/okami.jpg

I see you've taken up attempting something along the lines of KidBuu's sig. I like it, but I hate all the bars. Maybe switch up the shades of orange to create some more depth.

Thanks for the feedback. I loved the pen tooling on Kidbuu's Okami ( hope you don't mind) so I tried it out myself. The bars right... i gotta stop using those..

The boxes are just way too much, maybe one or two but six or seven is just too overwhelming.
The light source is very bright and the sig lacks colour.
Text doesn't really fit as well.
This one is just too bright and dis-coloured.

^ Have to agree with ptka on everything there.