Afro Samurai

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/918...ontestjune.png

Made for a contest on another forum. What do you think of it and how do you think it can do. CnC.

Imo this is your best yet! However, there are still loads of crits i can give.
1. The focal of the samurai, most of it is erased? That white circle to the right is distracting as well.
2. The text is bad. Too small and slightly tacky.
3. The left side I think would look better sharpened, not blurred.

Apart from that, the colour are great, the use of C4D and brushes are neat and the lighting on the focal is good. kiu.

I like the effects, but text need works, it's small and hard to read, rest looks pretty good though, not bad.

Did Apathy just C&C something? Really? Holy god!!
Yeah text need work, and the focal is kinda hidden
agree with all the above
good work tho!

Effects are nice, but seems oversharpened in places and blurry in others. That light blue text doesnt belong either.

A little too much going on in this one.
Also, try not to duplicate the render and then scale it up just to fill space.
It doesn't look natural if you do that.
Text could be larger and more transparent.
Good colours, but the effects are just too random.

Too much depth in this one, it looks too forced. you need forground mid and background for successful depth. Colours are great though GJ

Agreed with 2 above.