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Nice job, but imo you should bring lionel more out. left is kinda empty(boring|) love the smudging. dont feeling about the text, simple font? lightsource is oke. maybe some c4d's?
It's much too smudged, can't see the focal enough.
It's good smudging nonetheless, but it's just too much to handle. :D
^ Agreed, too much smudging, he's pretty hidden. Text isnt that great either, it's too blobby and squiggly :>
Like the smudging, but the render doesn't stand out much, but anyways, good job :D
BARCABARCA <-----------die hard Barca fanboy! and that player' is good with the exception of someone like Iniesta or Henry or Xavi!
ok bat the sig, hmm should clean it up, when its abt sports sig i think smudge wornt work too much,
you referring to the first or the updated?
v2 is much better. Its a bit oversharpened on the face though, i'd tone that down a bit.
Also i'd add a few effects to the right side and then it'd look much less flat. Overall though pretty good. Very jorrneh.
