l4d

made for my picky brother

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6885/l4dj.jpg

Too tall for me, tbh. The flow is alright but it needs some more effects. I think there's a bit too much text as well. Please allow me to be your second picky brother :D

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Originally Posted by DoubleForte

Too tall for me, tbh. The flow is alright but it needs some more effects. I think there's a bit too much text as well. Please allow me to be your second picky brother :D

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Thanks for the comments.

As for the picky brother application, you have been approved ;)

It's not bad, but as DF said, it's a bit tall.
Some of the text is alright, but some of it is just too random.
Not very grungy for a L4D sig, but it's not bad.

I agree with Battle Cat, the text ruins it a lot for me though.

as for the sig, the wireframe at the back is looking good butthe c4d in frnt is spoiling the effects, drop the cursive and change the color of rest text to sm dark it will be gr8, and try to be more subtle with your frnt effects, when using a bubble c4d always use the center of the bubble as most efficient part of it, u can use the whole bubble but then u will have to minimize the chances of making the sig look bad

and that look below text is umm not getting in the picture.
keep up the work :)