Sig I made

hey guys,

made a sig following daxx's tut
http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/7356/valkyr.png

thats my result

comments/critism on how to make it better would be awsome

Take out the border, Boarder in Overlay doesn't look good. Render isn't blended well enough into th rest of the sig imo but that may just be me. Also theres no Definative light source which kinda throws me personally.

^ Yeah what he said :P

Not bad Valkyr, this looks liek it represents the new game pretty well. I like the use of the red effects and dark BG. The biggest thing is to try and work the head into the BG a bit more. Also the two lines shooting off him, i'm not rly feeling those much, but your text is really pretty good! good job on that one!

also i agree^^ drop the border. Try to stick with black and white solid border, otherwise i wouldnt do them at all. Overlay borders ruin the entire point of having a border and make it useless, so having it there seems to be unnessesary.

Overasll pretty good maybe define a ligth source more and it could be rly good.

I like the effects but some of it like on the bottom right doesn't go too well. BG is plain like most of you said. Add a light source. Improve your text and border. Other than that, good job.

Other than the boring background this one is pretty good. :D
Colours are nice but make sure you blend and smudge the render a bit more.

thnx for ur criticism every1
will post an updated version l8r tonight