http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...fly-Heaven.jpg
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...ly-Heaven2.jpg
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Replace the lens flare with something a bit more "subtle".
Add more depth and replace the lens flare. Change the text. Rest is good.
^^Good idea.
The pen tooling might look better if it were flowing from the light and not just sitting on her hair.
Nice idea and it's not bad, just work on composition. :P
Redone version.
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...ly-Heaven2.jpg
The text is the best I could find as a match.
Hmm, text is good but it can be better.
Light looks cool now