My drawing

Okay, as a younger kid I always used to draw (maybe from 8 - 12 years old?) and I stopped as I got more involved in games on the PC. I'm now 15 and not drawn anything spectacular or hard in 3 years. Long time. I'm currently working on a piece that has taken me 3 and a half hours so far and it's far from finished. It's going to be my Dad's birthday present. Obviously there are amendments from the original to fit the canvas (didn't want it too small or too big.) I'm using this image (not very clear making it harder.)
http://i41.tinypic.com/w22kuh.jpg
Version 1 (WORK IN PROGRESS)
http://i42.tinypic.com/1zyu4k1.jpg
Sorry about the quality, best I could get.. :/ Just have to look harder. :p
What do you think? I'll update regularly. :D

well, the outlining looks good:)

Thanks, the thing that shocked me majorly was that because I expanded the drawing to fit the canvas without too much blank space was that I almost struggled to fit it on still. I'm hoping for a good end result.

if the rest will looks as good as the outlining, it will def. look good:)

The head is dis-proportional. Try making it longer and slimmer.

Gah! I forgot about this. I have updated it since too, it's coming along. Not finished yet though. I'll see if I can get an image up next week. :)