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Hellz yea, i know the colours are wierd so i'll change em..
http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/12/65/57/62/random12.png
cnc most appreaciated..

I think focal is too covered.
and yeah. chance colors :)
and i think you should hide that over guy in background :)

The focal is almost completely obscured by the effects, which are a bit low quality looking.
The colours aren't vibrant either, I just feel this one is a bit too filled up.