M

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...Buff/mcopy.png

eh..
how you like? C&C

v2: http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...ff/mcopy-1.png

I can barely see the M. Effects are good but its too dark on the left and too light on the right. BI don't really get the focal either. Are they about to kiss or what..

The effects are sweet! But I can barely see the focal, furthermore the ext. I like it alot but make the focal stand out more Miril. What is up with you and these lousy mistakes. You're too good for that. Sorry if I sound demanding.

ahaha sorry to disappoint Takken, thanks for thinkin that highly of meh though :O
edited a few things, text is hard on this one for me, idk what to really do, but i tried something different

v2: http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...ff/mcopy-1.png

I love V2. I can see you lightened up the left side. The focal is clear to see. I see that your trying to have sex :P Only problem with this is that text is misplaced. Other than that, the rest is okay.

Ok. Now you got an epic sig there. Text, hmmm, it'll do for now. The flow is excellent and the focal can be seen more clearly (though it might be for the foact I know what to look for lol). I love it. Great work!

ahah thats why i cut off the bottom bit... they're kinda.. connected...... xD
i love working with two focals like this, its real tough to find a stock/render that'll even half work but its awesome once you get one
i'll keep workin on the txt :D thanks

The focal is blended a little too well, very nice smudging but the focal is just a little bit to see.
I really like the colouring and the text is good as well, you may not be able to see it right away, but it's good. :D

I've honestly never heard blended too well xD hahah but uh oh, let's see if I can fix it..
Thanks ptka :D

I just think you need just a tiny more contrast between the stock and the background, just the right amount. ;)