Resident Evil Signature

Ver.1
http://i43.tinypic.com/fdaond.png

Ver.2
http://i42.tinypic.com/f53m1h.png

CnC Please :D

The truth is that it pretty much lame menz. The focal can barely be seen and the BG has no depth or flow. What were you thinking while making this!? Not your best at all.

I'm agreeing with Takken here, if it didn't say resident evil in the title I wouldn't have known!
I think it's too monotone and too dark.

Try not to cover up the render so much, try to use some of the original colours in the render.
Did green have anything to do with the render.
I would read a few more tut's in the Tutorials Section.