Warbreak

http://i41.tinypic.com/10pzyx1.png

I'm trying out a new style here, so please tell me what I need to add/improve on. :)

Here's the second version: http://i41.tinypic.com/5agin9.png

Also, here's the stock that I used to make this: http://tinypic.com/r/vnf0ab/5

Needs more depth, and a defined focal. I would blur the background, increase the light source and do some dodging on the main character. Seems to be lacking in effects and flow but i quite like the simplicity. But again it seems sloppy

I love the stock you used but the sig needs more depth!

it looked like you just topazed and aded lighting and text. add more substance and make use of the flow

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Originally Posted by SSSSK

it looked like you just topazed and aded lighting and text. add more substance and make use of the flow

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Lol, the funny thing is, that's exactly what I did. :D


Anyway, thanks for the tips and suggestions. :)

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Originally Posted by Ascarine

Needs more depth, and a defined focal. I would blur the background, increase the light source and do some dodging on the main character. Seems to be lacking in effects and flow but i quite like the simplicity. But again it seems sloppy

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I actually did do some minimal dodging on the main character, and I don't see how something simplistic can seem "sloppy".