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Criticism highly welcome.

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/9192/83577751.jpg

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3023/21644332.jpg

I like em both, the first one seems blended better, but the second one seems more abstract and random, cool ideas, kiu .

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Originally Posted by gy!be

Criticism highly welcome.

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/9192/83577751.jpg

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3023/21644332.jpg

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I personally like the first one a lot more since the second one has too much going on for my liking.
The problem with it though is that there isn't a focal for it. It is still abstract, but I just think it works best with a focal.
However, I like the colouring. Maybe get a few more colours on the left.
Good job!

Not a fan of this one for reasons above - too busy for my liking.
That said, the left is very nice. Lots of texture and abstract.
It is just the really bright stuff which doesn't appeal to me.
Keep making these - you have interesting concepts.

what is it?
brighten up all areas where there are sources of light