Sydrome

http://graphics.b3yondelite.co.uk/al...s/SYNDROME.png

Made for a upcoming battle.


Cnc?


EDIT: I typo'd the title. It should say Syndrome.

the lighting depth and the left side is lovely
i did like to see smthing else on the right, its eating up space compared to the left
the bg fits fine but again the right is showing too much bg,
idk its just my thinking but if u put some text there(next to the girl, but a little far from her,),even if its small it will make big difference,
u know what i m saying ;)
it did be like adding a pinch of oregano to baked meat ;)

its empty right side and i think the c4d placement is clever but its needs to be transformed horizontally

scary.. sides are empty but nice sig in overal, you could do the c4d at the right side too but only a bit smaller

Thanks guys. I'll see what i can do.

it is really intresting , but i think its to empty, some more c4d's or something would make it
more intresting, but this far its awesome, hope u will have good go in tournament

Too empty and while the abstract you have covering the focal is creative, I don't like it at all. Your depth, is like, .... No comment xD not one of my faves from you.

thsi si a pretty slick job. C4d placement is good.I agree rigth side needs work but overall its pretty good. Nice job!