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Cnc please..

First thing that pops into my mind....

Homosexual.

Other than that. Pretty good. Don't like the random text symbols though.

The C4Ds are horrible imo. That low opacity one is ewwy :S You've overdone the lighting too. The low opacity C4D doesn't reflect darkness, should've done an adjustment layer for that. Not feeling this at all man, really messy and yucky imo.

Don't lower opacity on c4d's if you set them to screen, they end up half see through and look like crap.

The effects on the left seem a bit much, get rid of some of it and remove the c4d on the right and this will b decent.