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not bad for first vert, the focal is a little messy, clean up the face part, also the depth of the bg is hard to determine with it so blurry like that. sharpen closer bg areas, and blur further back areas for better depth, try addin on new version of the original stock sharpen a little and then erase areas that are far away progressively. then do the same thing but backwards with a blurred version of the original stock. also might want to erase some of that c4d there, it looks like a blob of c4d and not really part of the design. good for first vert tho kiu. also RIP Michael.
looks rly LQ and kinda not finished..
really dont get it.
agree with the above, i barely can see the render - its overblured and it should be wayyy bigger to stand as focal, the c4d are ok i would liquify the end of it though, also try to colorize c4d some other color (oange or yellow), but its just my taste mate :)
Yeah I agree with blur and sharp, fo sho. Yeah the stock became little LQ after that Ive Resized it that much and so on. There for the blury face. Great tip Domino ^u^
About the c4d stand out, thats exactly what Im aiming for with this one, no ripple, sharp and clean lines and flow. Im tired of ripple now. My new sig style is never ripple, like my Sunset sig, ah sharp lines flow, yummy :p Kinda try to find my own Vert style, even in my first one.
Yeah depth sucks hard ass, hate doing blur bg, over blurred alot.
Well gonna do a V.2 fo sho... some day >u< Its summer you know. Thanx a thon you guys... and girl ;)
This is that kind of crit and com that I were looking for, to see if any vert tag master replys... *cough*nfea*cough*... and you others too of course.
Cya when Its edited *smiles*
