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Okay, so me and Fuzer were supposed to be doing a collab but he made something so well to start off with I couldn't do much to it- damn you Fuzer.
Just kidding. <3
So I decided to use the stock I chose (which Fuzer nicked :p) and using a similar start made my own.
My result:
http://i42.tinypic.com/2l6wx5.jpg
My best, in my opinion.
Comments/Critiques. :D
I like it. The effetcs are good at the bottom of his body, and I love the color change at eithar side if him, and the text fits in nicely. Good work
one of the best :D I particularly like the effects on his tongue. Well done
The effects on his tongue were actually already there. :p Thanks for the comments, I love this. :D
well i may be dissapointing you, but i want to give honest CnC
1st off - it lacks depth, maybe add some smudging in front of him, or add some c4d and blur it just a bit, also right side is a bit plain, try to add a c4d or few of them BEHIND him and blur them so it would increase your depth
bottom effect looks just great
im also not feeling color of right side that much, i guess its bit out of contest try to add color balance or selective color adjustment with layer mask applied and try to experiment till you will think its a nice color
nice job though dude
EDIT: ur 2nd (blue one) is really nice, lovely lightning and effect, no unbalanced colors and nice quality
Thanks for the comment Dron, I'll try what you said; you mentioned the right side twice though.
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1st off - it lacks depth, maybe add some smudging in front of him, or add some c4d and blur it just a bit, also right side is a bit plain, try to add a c4d or few of them BEHIND him and blur them so it would increase your depth
When you say in front of him where do you mean roughly? By his head?Quote:
im also not feeling color of right side that much, i guess its bit out of contest try to add color balance or selective color adjustment with layer mask applied and try to experiment till you will think its a nice color
i meant over his bottom area, but i guess its not that necessary lol, since you got nice effect at the bottom.though some nice c4ds behind him would look cool man, to fill in that emptyness in the right, and change that brown color ~.^, try this?
http://colorschemedesigner.com/
It's part of the stock, the only possible way to change the brown is color balance and such.
