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urmm c&c

Way too dark. Effects are OK, but there is no depth, it is really flat. Try brightening it up and sharpening the focal point.

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rly not feeling this one at all, sorry mate

i would lighten up his face at least, it would help with your depth and i would add some txt, other than that quite cool effect, though they are not that clear in all the darkness