I had a bit of trouble with this, mainly because I'm not used to the size of a wallpaper compared to the size of my signatures and also because its only about my 2nd wall.
http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs47/f/20...iverpool11.png
Optimus Prime Wall
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07-02-2009, 05:23 AMKaka11|LFCOptimus Prime Wall
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07-02-2009, 09:46 AMDom
Well, in my opinion it's hard for us to give you comments because it's for your personal use on your PC. Nobody else will see it, so if you like it then that's fine.
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07-02-2009, 09:55 AMKidBuu
this sucks
the grungyness doesnt match with optimus prime
plus that blue spots arnt making it better -
07-02-2009, 11:32 AMratchetnclankQuote:
Originally Posted by KidBuu
There's being a harsh critic and then there is being an arse.
Be the former buu not the latter. -
07-02-2009, 07:01 PMKaka11|LFCOk, thanks anyway.Quote:
Originally Posted by dccarnage
Ok...Quote:
Originally Posted by KidBuu
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07-04-2009, 09:42 AMPapa
This LP is okay. However it could use some touch ups. The Bakground doesnt exactly mesh with the transformers robot. Think of it, a sleek new age robot with technology far superior to anythign we have ever thought of. Why put that by a grungy old looking wall thing. Make it look sick. A sleek backround, know what i mean? The scan lines/ pattern is a litttle odd too. it seems liek you were giving it an old looke specailyl wiht the text. I'd drop it tbh.
The text is okay but Use a mroe new age font. Try fire eye GF or something. Thats a great futuristic font.
The blue is okay but seems a bit flat especailyl wiht the lighting. Maybe make him a bit easier to see. Also Crop the BG a bit so it follows the rule of thirds. I'd try to read up on that a bit composition is a very important part of gfx.
Overall its rly not bad. Just needs some minor touchups. -
07-05-2009, 12:20 AMKaka11|LFC
Alright thanks for all that Papa, I see what you mean by making it look futuristic and new age and that sort of thing.
