Portraits

Hey guys.

I did some portraits of one of my friends. And i'd like some feedback, aka. comments and critique:)

Love
- Alex

Deviantart
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs49/i/20...rEilertsen.jpg

Deviantart
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs48/i/20...rEilertsen.jpg

niiiiiiiiiiice work dude, i like the second one, the contrast is awesome,

First one is okay> but her hair takes up liek 80% of the frame not feeling that, its not rly a hair advert or anything so i'd like to see mroe of her face. Second is pretty cool, nice bokeh. Maybe crop a bit to make the compo a bit more prominent?

honestly, they're pretty average. don't take that as a bad thing. that means you've got your composition and posing down. It just means that you also need to step up the interest to your shot. Next time around, try and introduce some lighting into your picture. You'll be amazed at how much more interesting the final outcome looks.