My time has been... Takken

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2490/mytimesig.png
My latest sig, it was made for the sotw. I would like the thoughts of the ol' pros please. CnC!!

not an old pro here, but I will cnc nonetheless. Would have liked to see more detail inside the watch, it seems kinda blurry and dark on watch face. right side of sig looks nice, left side seems empty and the text is good placement, hard to read tho, maybe make text clearer or slightly bigger. The depth is ok, could be better, try sharpening the part of the watch that sticks out (left side of watch, to the right of text, just the rim) , nice job takken.

Okay, I made a V2. Just sharpened the main focal a bit so is this better?

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/8578/mytimesigv2.png

I don't normally comment on signatures, but I think you should rethink the boarder. It is hard to see, and makes it look like it doesn't have one. Try making it thicker, and a darker color, or you could try the letter boxed style.

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Originally Posted by Pet

I don't normally comment on signatures, but I think you should rethink the boarder. It is hard to see, and makes it look like it doesn't have one. Try making it thicker, and a darker color, or you could try the letter boxed style.

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Letter boxed style?

I think it looks pretty good, but I personally think there should be some more effects on the left side of the tag.

The typo really hurts it for me. The font size makes it barely legible, and the bright contrast of the color seems a little too...contrasting. :P I like it other than that, nice job.