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Yeah really didn't like this tbh Jeff, sorry. Focal is 70% of the canvas and whether you DPed it or whatever, it just looks like a big render with some snow and a blurred body. Sorry ;)
Kill the text, and i think it looks decent tbh. Nice, clean and simple. It works
I really like this myself, nice clean vector with some good effects. I'd agree with silent though the text doesn't work here.