I made two versions:
V1:
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7794/boxing.png
B&W:
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6976/boxingbw.png
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I made two versions:
V1:
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7794/boxing.png
B&W:
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6976/boxingbw.png
That glow on tyson's glove is a little awkward. Not sure what you wanted to make it look like, but it doesn't feel very well placed. The typo is also a little small and hard to read. I like how you positioned the stocks though; focal point is well placed.
For the BW, keep in mind why we use black and white. Sometimes color doesn't do an image enough justice, whereas a bw could present so many more shades of grey. That may be a bad explanation, but take for granted black and white is meant to add to an image, rather than just show the absence of color. Taking the saturation out of a picture doesn't necessarily warrant it for a quality bw image. At any rate, the colored version is much better.
Thanks Sol.
The B&W version is better because the colour scheme in V1 doesn't flow well.
The glow on the hands is overdone a bit.
Imo, the splatters seem a bit randomly placed?
Text is okayy, could be better, but its alright.
I think its better than some of your previous ones though, and I am seeing improvements. It's just you need to make sure everything flows together more, and not just put things there for the sake of it. Theres got to be a reason for everything you do. You'll soon figure this out, so GJ so far!
THanks Active. Really wanted your opinion because you give me harsh CnCs lol xD
yea trust me its for the best!