V1:
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9875/iphonetext.png
V2:
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4707/ipjone1.png
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Sharper maybe? Nice though dude, keep em comingg :)
seems too oversharpened on the left effect that's crossing over the phone. And the phone's screen too. Looks good other than that.
Personally, I think this would look better if it were a vector tag, but that's just my two cents.
i agree with jool