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Please CnC
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I'll be honest just because I want to help you. I think the render is too tucked away to the side. Should be just to the left/right of the center. The background is rather weird in my opinion, doesn't fit the render. Text isn't bad.
The text is my favorite part, to be honest. The left doesn't help the sig in unifying the overall image, while the stock doesn't look too HQ to be honest. Some parts look too blurred, while others look too sharpened.