TIME Sotw entry

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u...timesotwv4.png

comments and critiques plox, thax
watch i cut out:
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u...atchrender.png

Really Really like it, its simple and looks stunning. I don't think i would say change anything apart from the "DOMINO" in the bottom left and the STOW in the right. They should be replaced with something more elegant and less boxy for the domino and something more apropriate for the STOW

thx ascarine, ya i see what u mean now, i updated it and added v2, good eye. is that better?

The fonts use ain't working for me.
The 'DOMINO' is pretty unreadable.
'TIME' stands out too much
and the 'SOTW' text just doesn't fit with the theme at all.

Pen tool line is a bit distracting too...

thx for feedback, updated above post with fixed up version, that text was tricky, still not 100% satisfied, but it will have to do.

Which lamo de-repped me for my comment.
Bish PURLEEZE!.