Some old ones I found

I was thinkering through my boxes with old computer spare parts and I found an old HDD so I swapped it and found some old Pshop stuff so I would like some C&C on two pieces please.
#1
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e2...indfolded2.jpg
#2
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e2...nsomnia-ne.jpg

and this is what I did to improve #2
(looks a bit messy, no?)
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e2...somnia-ne2.jpg

3rd is my faw, colours are great! and text is nice , tho hard to see it well, keep it up :)
but one tip - try more blend in ur render,stock :)

yeah I tried blending it in, but then I realized to do that I would need to re-do the whole thing and I realized that wont be possible cos it's like a 2 years old sig lol

The first would have to be my favorite. The others look a tad messy.

Could I get some more C&C on how to improve the 2nd/3rd one please?

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Originally Posted by Insomnia

Could I get some more C&C on how to improve the 2nd/3rd one please?

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I don't think the colours are working real well. Your character is almost like a black and white image, yet you have a very vivid background.
You might want to tone down the colour strength so that the background isn't so overpowering.