Dead Space Tag!

http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w...dSpacecopy.png

Hia guys! Got any suggestions for me? Perhaps something I could do with the text?

This would be much better if the canvas weren't as large on the sides, and the render was flipping around so that it flowed with the background.
And the text could do with a change-up, lower it so that it's in line with one of the three eyes. ;)
And make sure that it's not just black. Try a smoother font..

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Originally Posted by Ptka

This would be much better if the canvas weren't as large on the sides, and the render was flipping around so that it flowed with the background.
And the text could do with a change-up, lower it so that it's in line with one of the three eyes. ;)
And make sure that it's not just black. Try a smoother font..

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Are talking about something like this?

http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w...pacecopy-1.png

Yes but something looks off about it now.
Make sure that there is more contrast between the render and the background.
Maybe try dodging and burning.

i agree, canvas to big o.o and text need some work, u know, close to focal, so it dont distrack it?, sig is too dark,but if u could do it more lighter i think u wouldnt have any problem with text :) but this far realy nice,keep it up :)

just crop of the sides and it will be as good