DJ Sean Ryan logo

This is for my sister's boyfriend, DJ Sean Ryan.
Tell me what'cha think.

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6729/srlogoa.png

Don't RIP!!!!... please...

I like the way you have used the headphones.

This is a good logo nice work.

This is a good piece, although there are some things I don't like.

1. the placement of the "a" is a little awkward, The direction that the text is traveling, or the way it's placed in a diagonal setting is a little abrupt. If the S followed a more consistent pattern with the rest of the letters, say, in a straight up and down to left and right sort of way, it wouldn't seem so awkward. Ensuring that your typography is consistent enough to work with a majority of readers (those that read left to right) is a good way to make your logo more user-friendly. You want people to be able to easily read what's being said. The reason I say this is because, I actually had to focus so as to not assume it said "SEN", which was my first impression. In order for you to successfully brand this typeset, you need to ensure that the entire name is placed in such a way that all of it is understood, and you don't lose the effectiveness of your logo.

2. The smiley face is a good way to express the client brand. You did this well.

3. Is there really a need to add "ryan" to the end of the logo? I think with what you've got, you've created a logo that is simple yet elegant enough to make the excess identity fairly unnecessary. Take off that extra name, and you've still got a memorable logo.

Yea well done, I was gonna bring to attention Chris' last point there but i guess he got there first:p Good wrk , well done.