Some of my artworks

Waiting for ur observations!
CnC please!




http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/u...sassin/FOB.jpg
http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/u...umyakucopy.jpg
http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/u...n/vampsig3.jpg
http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/u.../sub0-yaku.jpg

You have some idea of blending in the one with the bubble gum girl so I will focus on that one.
The C4D's need some work, especially the placement, you should make sure that they aren't so obvious, erase parts and blend them in too.
The colours are a bit wild, you could tone them done in some parts.
Rule of thirds: Try not to put your focal right in the middle of the canvas.
And the text could be less obvious, it's very large and pops out which isn't good for a sig like this.

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Originally Posted by Ptka

You have some idea of blending in the one with the bubble gum girl so I will focus on that one.
The C4D's need some work, especially the placement, you should make sure that they aren't so obvious, erase parts and blend them in too.
The colours are a bit wild, you could tone them done in some parts.
Rule of thirds: Try not to put your focal right in the middle of the canvas.
And the text could be less obvious, it's very large and pops out which isn't good for a sig like this.

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Thanks for the comment. I will take ur advices =)
Well I actually like the text in the bubble gum one,it looks good as it pops out from the image.But thats just my opinion =).I guess you are professional in graphics so i will take ur advices.Im not that good in Photoshop,ive been only using it for like 1 or 1 and half years. But actually I dont think they look so bad =o

About the C4Ds maybe u are right but ive seen a lot of sigs with C4Ds that pop out of the image.

And another thing.What do u mean by ''wild colors''? they seem to vivid?

thanks in advance =)

The Fall Out Boy sig is weak, tbh. I don't like how the c4d is crossing into the stock and the pattern overlay just kills it.

I like the bubble gum one, but c4d placement needs some work as well as the text. Seems random.

I get where you were going for the Itachi one, but the colors are too strong while it seems really busy. And the font goes against the entire feel of the sig.

I like where you were going with the Sub Zero one, but I really think you need to work with color and text.

well ive made this yesterday. C&C Please

http://i652.photobucket.com/albums/u...ewentzcopy.jpg