Disturbed

Some new brushing im trying.. i think this is an improvement in the works..
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...sturbedsig.png

The text is weird. the renders is way to sharp. i like it.

Yeah really need to hold Shift when you resize your renders.
I can't really tell what you have done or haven't done just because it's so squished.

the render is way too stretched

This one i put a little more time in my brushing. Blending is my weakness.
CnC please!!
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...urbedsiggy.png

Much Better. You used grunge brushes? Next time try and use c4ds and maybe use a stock look up tuts.

i used a c4d just lightened it up to much.. i didnt want to make it obvious.. but its an improvement..tx for the comment