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http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h2...n-the-park.gif
I know it needs text but i like it alot how it is and when i added the text it kind of ruined it but comment for me and heres the stock i used incase u guys want it
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h2...x768-35990.jpg
Looks pretty good Shane, but you should work on your flow (direction of the sig).
It's a bit chaotic.
Some parts are also a bit over contrasted.
I like the placement of the render and the things you've done to it, just make sure that it has more flow. ;)
That light thing on the left is weird and the left side of her face looks... off. Like some parts look sharpened, others look blurred. She has such pretty green eyes. I'd highlight that somehow. Or not. Up to you.
See what i did with that stock
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8...streamnsta.jpg, one thing that stock is impossible lol.. too hard.
you need a border. and some bit of gausian blur.
nothing is impossible with imagination muhahaha
