Protect To Server

I am well stuck on this. So CnC it please :)


http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/511...thecountry.png

AW nice one :) i like the colours, but i think left side looks to empty, i think u need put the text closer to focal [ render ] and it will be great :)
GJ!

Thanks. However it was meant to say protect to serve. Dammit. Well thank you for the comments.

Good effects on the right hand side mate, i find the left abit distracting, try filling out, not sure what to suggest though.

i like the effects.. But the BG doesnt look right to me.. but thats just me..i think it needs something more to it.