Found some great c4d's to make this... take a look, tell me what'cha think.
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/409...msig12copy.png
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Found some great c4d's to make this... take a look, tell me what'cha think.
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/409...msig12copy.png
Hmm i like your c4d usage. makes for great blending. First thign i notice though is this tag is red. Maybe drop that adjustment layer. Keep more of the natural colors so it doesnt look so monotone. If that isnt an option, black and white isnt a bad idea.
Also next tag make sure to take the rule of thirds into account. Right now you seem to be placing your render smack in the center. You wanna move it to around the 1/3 mark or the 2/3rd mark but not in the center.
Good job with the text i like the font choice and the c4d blending is nice.
Overall not bad but maybe work on the c4d blending just a tad on her right shoulder. it seems to just stop all the sudden and looks a bti strange
thanks for the feedback :D I really truly appreciate all that you guys have done for me... given me great tips and kept me goin....
A little more CnC for ya:
Try adding more depth, nothing should be more visible than you focal, and my eyes are drawn more to the bottom left and right, you should bring your focal out more, and add a LOT of depth.
i like the outlook style.. too muh red for me.. Overall great work...