Slipknot

Just something simple nothing fancy.
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...slipknot-1.png

I'd say work on your brightness/contrast. You have the lighting there but I think because of the contrast it's not looking too good. Might wanna up the opacity on the text as well, I can barely see it.

Its ok but not personally my taste

it looks like something under construction to me.
and yea higher the opacity of the text,it would look better i guess