DMC

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5682/dmccopy.jpg

any tips to make it better??

The depth is pretty awesome and the flow is good. The lighting seems a bit too jammed in there. The focal shouldn't be so close to the left mate so that is why it seems so. The text, I'm not liking. It fails but it is a good sig otherwise. Keep trying:)

Pretty good nice job

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Originally Posted by Takken

The depth is pretty awesome and the flow is good. The lighting seems a bit too jammed in there. The focal shouldn't be so close to the left mate so that is why it seems so. The text, I'm not liking. It fails but it is a good sig otherwise. Keep trying:)

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i agree also the light at the end of the barrel seems distracting

The Light filters seem to wash out the sig. I think it may be the colour choices.
Also the Flash text seems blury.

I do think it looks good though. I Love the DMC series :D