back again...tried really hard

i'm back again...i tried really hard with this one....

let me know how can i improve...thanks

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c3...formercopy.jpg

The text. :'(

What program are you using?
I think you should se the C4D's to another type of blending mode. It might look a lot better.

Optimus looks a bit bright in colour.
I like the smudging in the background. :)

Sorry if what I've said is such a let-down

no its not a let down...i'm new at this so its kool..
thanks for the comment tho...it really helps because i'm trying to get better

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Originally Posted by λdam

The text. :'(

What program are you using?
I think you should se the C4D's to another type of blending mode. It might look a lot better.

Optimus looks a bit bright in colour.
I like the smudging in the background. :)

Sorry if what I've said is such a let-down

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Tips:
-Change text of transformers,, and try place text close to the focal, so it dont distract from the main thing.
-use normal border on this one :D
+cool colours :D and i love optimus!
-Try make main light on signature.
-work a bit with c4d's, ur on right way! :)
GJ mate ;)