New undead sigs

http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...0/undead_2.png
http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/t...710/wargod.png

tell me what you think can be improved on please

For some reason I like the first one, but that text is yucky...you should work on lighting more too, not that the lighting is bad but you see how its really bright at the top of the skull? Your main light source should be up there more.

they look nice. but don't place the text in the corner :D

The effects are pretty cool. They portray neat flow but the depth could do with more work. The colours in both are great! But the text fails. Don't place them so in the corner, and try for simpler fonts.

http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/6103/77695014.png

Hows that..?

The text is a bit dark but the placement and font is way better! Still need to add the depth though but it is a good piece!

hmmm, well i'll let him do that hah

wow joekz love that text. where did u get it?

which one the nexus or the undead?

Both. i havnt relly experimented with text much but i want text like that