Dark Knight

CnC please. Be hard on this one..I need to know what im doing wrong.. Maybe some helpful tips on making it better..
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...darkknight.png

Try not to smudge the face,main focal, into the background. The whole left of the focal is empty. The render is also kinda LQ. Could use some work but if you fix the short comings it'd be great. Nice smudging BTW

The settings i use i think sometimes i over smudge when blending,.i know i messed up on the focal i over erased a bit.. The render is actually good its just what i did when smudging and blending might of ruined it..i did alot of layering on him.. so could be the reason for it.. Tx for the tip..

I think you over dampened the render. Try sharpening the edges a bit, you can use shadows to move him to the background without losing focus on the render. It just takes some finesse. Using effects will make the shadows look real without pushing it into 2D.

I think it's too dark. There's no light source so that'd be a good start.
Render is over-blended, there's no flow although your smudging is good.
Text again is bad but like I always say it's hardest part of a tag most of the time.
Are you using C4D's?
Read up some more tutorials, you'll get there. I did. ;)

Some c4ds but nothing great that i can use i have to find some more packs to Dl.. Ty for the input..

The blending is good, but you smudged the face too much and the edges of the render need to be blurred or something. It needs a light source and you need to give it a some more depth. Nice try though. :D

here i love to use colors not just to dark colors thats just me and yah like they were saying try not to smudge the focal so much just enough to blend it and try using a better light source i cant really see any and since its a dark sig u need one but great job