New

Made it for someone else, cnc please

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5397/heinous.jpg

i like the bg just i dunno about the colors for it.The render could use a little more blending in give it some depth but overall not bad work..

I have to agree. The bg colors aren't really what I would pick. Try using a cooling filter.
It's VERY clean and crisp though which is very nice, and you did a very good job.
I'm impressed. Again, I agree, there isn't a ton of depth to it, try multi layering with some additional effects.

I agree, very nice work to say the least. but blending the render is needed.

The background is far too busy, to me it just looks like a pile of C4D's whacked on there then a render chucked on top and some text.
I recommend reading some tutorials because your backgrounds are really too much.
Keep trying, I can see your keen.

Don't like the collors of the bg. Text is good too. But the render could use some blending. Overall it's nice