A new one

http://i30.tinypic.com/vxl0xx.jpg

Appreciate any input mates.

too dark on the right hand side. give it a little brightness adjustment.

http://i31.tinypic.com/16azdjr.jpg
another version

http://i25.tinypic.com/20jhk4o.jpg
still playin around, heres another

Last one ftw
don't really know what the focal is, but looks cool though

I like it;)