http://i406.photobucket.com/albums/p...g?t=1249794126
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ughhh don't really undersstand what the focal is.
theres a focal?? it is really difficult to make out what it is. Like the text and the shapes but thats all i can say cos i dnt know what it is
it's a suit :P
For me its a bit too small. and i dont understand what u meant as ur render? and i cant read the text, i think u need do some changes
-work on text.
-make render more understandable, i mean focal.
-left side is to empty, maybe move ur stock more to middle ;)
Tho really nice colours, great job there mate!
Im not a big fan of this one.. No focal, sizing is too small.. Suggestion.. Make your sigs min 325 px X 125 px to 400 px X 150-175 max.. Thats just a ruff size avg..Go any smaller its hard to see the actual picture.. And if your not feeling the style of the text or the colors just leave it out.. Text isnt an easy task to position on your signature.. Keep checking out the tutorials here to further help you on what you want to accomplish in your sig..
I guess the focal is hard to get when you don't know what it :P. I will keep that in mind when I do my next tag. Also the text is not supposed to be that noticeable. It's just there to go with the flow.