Spider

Got some help from papa's tutorial, but threw some of my own flavor in this as well. C&C appreciated.

http://i665.photobucket.com/albums/v...spideyHEK2.png

This PaPa's tutorial is really good , but your outcome is so bad between papa's >> Change colors, add some effects and will be better ;)

To plain. The light needs to be toned down..Maybe add some more effects.. Good effort though..

i agree with the above, i would also add though to remove the flare from the LS it makes it look tacky and crap. It doesnt actually look that bad. You need to clean up around the focal and lower the intensity of the LS but otherwise it looks ok.