Deadly Sig

the 1st one i used in the battle vs GFXBest
::Color::
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2.../deadlytag.png

::B/W::
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...eadlybwtag.png

10 views and no comments? Hmm.
I prefer the coloured version for sure. Render is nicely blended, text is positioned well but the one thing bothering me is the C4D's, just seem whacked on there if I'm honest.
The sides are a bit empty too.
Good try, keep it up. I've seen better from you if I'm honest. ;)

too much lighting on the focal everything else is great though

the effects behind the focal are severely overshapened and the colors are to contrasted, while the focal is blurry and of poor quality. text isn't really fitting either.