Predator tag

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h2...3/predator.gif
comments?

i like the spatter on the right of the render but i dont like anything else in the tag man keep working :)

need to define your focal more. it's too blended. right now the focal is the splatter effect instead of the render.

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Originally Posted by (-)Ion

need to define your focal more. it's too blended. right now the focal is the splatter effect instead of the render.

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yea dont want to distract us man : <. as help take focal points like this. scroll down a bit sway, ur eyes away from the tag, then scroll up and look straight at the tag for a second and notice what u look at first, clearly u would have lookd at the bright yellow splatter there.

that can be fixd easily, just mess with the lighting a tad. oh and too much blending with the predator man : < way too much. keep it up though!

The focal is very dark.. The left side a bit plain.. Maybe tone it up a little.. Would be much better...Nice effort..