pineapple

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/1149/pineapple.png

so tell me how much it sucks pls.

its very very nivr msn i had to look at it a few times to figure out what it was lol very nice concept and colors man great job

^ thats a compliment!

how can i improve it? i could try using dull colors but it didnt work out :\

nickelodeon colors worked for some reason :\

I like it, man. It's not bad at all. The colors are really nice; they stand out a lot. The only thing I'd work on is toning down the sharpness a bit. You only want to use that tool when absolutely necessary, but not too much.

Good work. :)

yea i have a fetish for really vibrant stuff : >.

ill take away the sharpness.

the colors are a bit much for my taste. all really saturated, vibrant colors one a white bg makes it a bit hard to look at. i'd bet that if you took the lime green and changed it too one of the darker shades of teal like in your current (like the shape of the one very lop left or 2nd) it'd tone it done a lot and look pretty good.

very good critic thank u. that is what i am lookin for! thank u

i dunno why i cannot edit my posts but

http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/623...pineapple2.png

o.o

Version 2 is a lot better. The focal stands out clearer in my opinion.
This is why I wanted you in my team; your style is unique.
Really nice job mate, keep it up.

v2 is awesome. Great job man.