my new piece of work taking on board previous help.
though that help was put into use i would like some more to further my ability. also i been hitting up tutorials in hopes they would help me here. so please rate and comment
Your text is a NO. You want to keep it small and simple. Read Papa's tut on it. It's kinda messy and having trouble with the flow. Good try though
08-19-2009, 11:47 PM
.blueflare
text is weird to look at o.o makes me look like a crossed eye dog man. simple text ftw.
ur skill is obviously improving. i like the way u organized the effects to have that certain "hey look at me flow". only thing that bothers me is the blue color. looks quite dull honestly, its just there :\ spice that up a notch BAM. : >
background is cool especially the right side. extend that style a bit.
good work
08-19-2009, 11:48 PM
Shane.
i love how blueflare always has something good to say nomatter what it is
it could be a dog taking a shit and he find something nice about it lol
08-20-2009, 12:32 AM
.blueflare
^ its a dog's natural way of wasting shit he has come across. even we shit man. its all cool