New to sigs, please rate

I'm not very good at sigs but I want to get better, I know most design rules, but again, would like to get better. I did this one today, if you guys could rate it (in a non harsh way unless it's that bad) and maybe just let me know how to improve. Also my text sucks, I just can't do text on sigs, anyways...
http://www.geocities.com/bardock72/vashrendersig.jpg

thanks for the input! I'm glad to be on these forums with such great designers.

Looks messy
and no one on this site is harsh really.

Lol, if you suck with text then dont add them unless you feel you could get better with them. It's kinda messy and monotoned. The blue just came out of nowhere on the sig imo.
Otherwise work on your flow.

i like the render man but the c4d used is too messy or chaotic text needs work its just there taking up space lol umm maybe use more colors like use some color from the eyes in the design also keep workin tho man you will get better

ok, anything else?

I kind-off like it actually,

I would blur like behind his head a bit and brush some black up like diagonally through the sides to add some depth :) That and then remove the text :)

The biggest thing that needs improvement in that sig is lighting

thanks, i like it, since its one of my first sigs, but i will work with it more

i like how it looks but not how it is presented. very chaotic indeed. the blue either should be white, red or black otherwise add some compliment blues in there.

good sig tho.

i like the text