My first line art

Original stock here - http://i29.tinypic.com/64qrdt.png

I left out the hair, and only colored afew places but yeah here it is :P

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z...LineArt003.png

alright for your first but i suggest you make your lines a little bigger around the head and body to separate it from the lines on the face. keep working on the pen tool and you be good in no time.