Jump

Outcome from following a tutorial by Joekz, what do you think? (couldn't think of a decent title for it)

http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showth...086#post446086

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3750/jumpv.jpg

u did a nice job following the tutorial but its not a good tag, i dont like joekz outcome its too plain and the flow is in 2 different directions